I think you add some more voice to some of the posts, in other posts though, you have a lot of voice.
I think the design is great though the fact that there are phones and t.v.'s in the baackground might not fit to well!
I think some parts need more voice with them. Other parts were well written. The T.V., lamp, and telephone are a little out of place in the background though.
I think you add some more voice to some of the posts, in other posts though, you have a lot of voice.
ReplyDeleteI think the design is great though the fact that there are phones and t.v.'s in the baackground might not fit to well!
ReplyDeleteI think some parts need more voice with them. Other parts were well written. The T.V., lamp, and telephone are a little out of place in the background though.
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